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A Voice Unheard

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Can anybody hear me?
My voice remains unheard,
no matter how loudly I speak.

They obviously can't hear me.
Sure They may hear me speak,
but are They really listening?

You have no idea what is happening.
I try to make You think I'm a happy person,
but would You still love me if I told You?
Done for last week's prompt on Live-Love-Write.

I guess I was thinking about my girlfriend when I wrote this... Her parents are divorced, and they hate each other... She's usually a happy person, but every now and then, I'll see "Hang on... family argument", wait an hour, and see "GOD I HATE MY FAMILY!"

And on the off chance she's reading this...

I can hear You.
I listen to You,
and I will always love You. :huggle:

Links:
:bulletblack: 04-30-10: If you like this poem, you may like "Inside" by ~NoOtherKing [link]
:bulletblack: 05-03-10: Also, check out "All I Can Do" by ~NicoleKay13 [link]

Updates:
:bulletgreen: 04-29-10: Yay! Featured by *xinsomniakydx here: [link]
:bulletblue: 04-30-10: I actually sent this to her via Facebook, and her response was something to the effect of "I love you! Thank you for listening to me! God knows I need it... :aww:"
:bulletgreen: 05-23-10: Another feature! :dummy: Featured by *Aquitius here: [link]
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